Fox blushed—blushed!—and shook his head. “Miss Burke is rather too sharp for a dull fellow such as myself.” He walked a few steps, then added, without a hint of slyness, “I should think her more suited to someone like you.”
An hour past, Gabriel would have laughed and said that a woman of a certain age who hid behind frumpy dresses and wire-rimmed spectacles was beneath his notice. But he could hardly deny that she had caught his attention. In his mind’s eye, he saw Merrick’s footman slipping that illicit piece of correspondence into her hands.
What else was she trying to hide?
Fox made a show of digging his watch from his waistcoat and starting in surprise at the information revealed on its face. “Goodness, look at the time. I must get home and change. I’m for Victoria’s tonight.”
So Fox hoped to avoid further discussion of what had just transpired? His reluctance suited Gabriel just fine. “Ah, another of Lady Dalrymple’s interminable dinner parties,” he drawled. “Do thank her for sparing me an invitation.”
It was a joke, of course. No one ever invited Gabriel anywhere.
With a rather guilty nod, Fox took his leave. Gabriel watched him walk in the direction of South Audley Street, though his mind was still elsewhere.
One encounter with Miss Burke’s sharp green eyes and even sharper Irish tongue had shown him a glimpse of a worthy adversary, and worthy adversaries were in short supply these days. He had grown rather weary of besting unworthy ones.
At this very moment, she was probably cautioning her cousin against him, relaying what Fox had confessed, making his life difficult. But every opponent he had ever faced had a weakness, and tomorrow’s walk in the park would give him a chance to learn hers.
He would find a way to reveal the companion’s secret and turn it to his advantage.
* * * *
“You asked me to keep an eye on the post, miss.” Curiosity was etched into the second footman’s face.
“Thank you, Tom.” Cami had given him almost the last coin in her purse to keep him from revealing what he knew, but now she wondered if keeping her secret would prove too much for him at last. She reached for the letter he was holding, hoping her fingers would not tremble and betray her nervousness. As she touched the pressed paper, she saw the red seal but refused to glance at the direction for fear she would see a hand she knew—Papa’s, or perhaps her sister’s.
The young footman nodded his acknowledgment and returned to his post, but not before offering a cautious smile and words of encouragement. “Good luck, miss.”
Not trusting her voice, Cami smiled weakly back, then hurried up the stairs to her bedchamber, clutching the letter against her breast.
Her name had not been written by a familiar hand. And she could tell from the postmark that the letter had been mailed within the city. She knew very well who must have sent it and the inevitable rejection it must contain. Still, she hesitated to open it, staring at the letter on her palm as if sheer dint of will could revise its contents.
“What foolishness,” she scolded herself after a moment. Settling atop her bed, one leg tucked beneath her, she turned the letter over, slid a fingernail beneath the wax seal, and lifted it. No point in delaying the inevitable.
As she unfolded the paper, her eyes were arrested by the letter’s opening words:
Dear Miss Burke,
I have read The Wild Irish Rose with great pleasure—
“Great pleasure” did not sound like a rejection. Surely a man as busy as Mr. Dawkins would not take time to express the great pleasure he had felt in tossing her beloved manuscript onto the rubbish heap…would he?
—and believe others will do the same, the more so given its timely—and, if you will permit me, rather extraordinary—subject matter.
“Extraordinary subject matter”? A euphemism, she supposed, for a woman’s foray into the world of politics. But as women’s opinions in such matters were so little valued otherwise, how else was Cami to speak if not through the pages of fiction? She returned her eyes to the letter.
However, as this novel purports to be a work of realism and not of the Gothic school, I must draw your attention to one flaw. I fear that a London audience will find your English villain wholly unbelievable, a caricature drawn out of Irish prejudice.
Annoyance pricked along her spine. Caricature? Ha! That only meant she had succeeded in holding up a mirror before one Englishman’s eyes. Now, if only she could force them all to recognize their reflection.
A man, even an Englishman, is rarely as unrelievedly bad as your Granville. Though it may seem to go against the moral of your tale, I assure you his failings will be more powerfully felt if he has been shown also to have some strengths. A faithful portrait must be drawn with light and shadow.
If you are willing to undertake these revisions, we are prepared to review the manuscript again, with an eye to purchasing it outright for publication. This is, as I am sure you are aware, quite a generous offer for an untried author.
Please indicate your intentions by return post.
Yours, &c.
Benjamin Dawkins, Jun.