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to Neil

Actually, I do mind. Because whatever this is … it’s not working.

A few changes:

Please, for the love of God, remove the umbrella from slide 1. Too basic, too obvious.

The aesthetic needs to be premium but still have mass appeal. This is too 6th grade power point-y.

The colour scheme is giving depression, not discount. Try again.

Need to send this to the sales team by EOD, so get cracking.

Yours sincerely,

Kavya

Sr. Graphic Designer

Jharokha